User talk:Cacodemon Leader

I've been rewording some of your articles. You might want to change the way you write things slightly. Remember that this is supposed to be like an encyclopedia. Dont write as though you're talking to the reader. For example, instead of something like, "When he takes enough damage in the first room, he teleports away and sends waves of enemies after you", phrase it like this: "After he takes enough damage in the first room, he teleports away and sends waves of enemies against the player. " Fraggle 07:45, 15 Jan 2005 (PST)