Talk:E4M1: Hell Beneath (Doom)

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Revision as of 19:24, 29 September 2011 by Ryan W (talk | contribs) (My proposed edits)

To 207.138.47.173: there's at least 4(four) medikits on HMP or lower: two near the green armor, and two on ledges near the level's beginning, accessible through secret #1.

My proposed edits

I have edited this article and put it at User:PolicyNonsense/Sandbox/E4M1: Hell Beneath (Doom). I made a copy because I don't know English well and need a lot of time to edit, so as to avoid breaking the article in the meantime. I'd like to know if this version is good enough.

I think it looks great!  Just a couple little things:
  • The part about Trent Reznor has nothing to do with gameplay, so it should go under Inspiration or Trivia.
  • (not true, the trigger linedef "overlines" the NIИ letters)   Quite true according to Ledmeister.
  • (or should the other exit from the central buildeing?)   The other exit is hidden and is not required to complete the level.  Therefore IMO it is an "Other point of interest".
Ryan W 00:24, 30 September 2011 (UTC)