Initial revision open for public comment
The terms of service are scheduled to take effect on May 29 (30 days from the initial posting). This is an adaptation of WikiMedia Foundation's ToS, tailored to the specifics of our site. I don't think there's anything that should be objectionable in here, but the wording of some things may need to be further refined. Feel free to point out mistakes or suggest modifications here. --Quasar (talk) 01:50, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
- Although we may host information that pertains to professional topics, including medical, legal, or financial issues
Um, really? It seems quite unlikely to me that we'd get pages about such issues. At most there could be talk of legal issues by way of copyright, trademark, and other so-called IP law questions... --Gez (talk) 13:02, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
- General disclaimer just in case anything on the site can be considered advice of such a nature. The likelihood IS low, but it is better disclaimed IMO. --Quasar (talk) 15:13, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
- We hope that no serious disagreements arise involving you, but, in the event there is a dispute, we encourage you to seek resolution through the dispute resolution procedures or mechanisms provided by the Projects or Project editions and the Wikimedia Foundation.
- In no event shall our liability exceed one thousand U.S. dollars (USD 1000.00) in aggregate.
- IANAL, so, I don't know. It was copied verbatim from the WMF version. If somebody wants to do research on the matter and can find out otherwise, I'll gladly change it. For that matter, I'm not terribly happy about setting the venue to Oklahoma as it means I get to handle the legal complaints personally should they arise :P I don't know what else to state though and it's better than me getting a subpoena for, say, a hearing in New York or California. --Quasar (talk) 15:13, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
- I found alternative legalese floating around that sets the liability to minimum regardless of what the legal requirement is, and have replaced the $1000 with that. --Quasar (talk) 21:02, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
Simple stuff first. :> Section numbers are in brackets.
- "reuse" isn't hyphenated in the summary box, but every other instance on the page is hyphenated
-  and offer a framework → and to offer a framework (parallel construction to preceding prepositional phrase)
-  reader, editor, author, or contributor of → reader, editor, author, or contributor to (preposition has to match the nearest subject word, or else put a preposition after each of the four)
-  The community - < . . . > - are the principal means → The community - < . . . > - is the principal means
-  most of which is either → most of which are either
-  other country laws → other countries' laws
- [4, final list] that of our users → those of our users
- [6e] Except as consistent → Except as is consistent
-  Manage otherwise → Otherwise manage
-  our services any time → our services at any time
-  the Doom Wiki community → the DoomWiki.org community (to match sections 4 and 6)
-  agree with → agree to (to match section 00)
- "Project" vs "Projects" should probably be consistent, though there may well be some lawyerly reason for using the plural when we only have one. Also, why is it capitalized in some places but not others?
- Applied all except ; this is grammatically proper and more concise in its existing form. --Quasar (talk) 19:22, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
Section numbers in brackets.
-  "Doom Wiki project" → "Doom Wiki project ("the Project")" (we're pre-defining "you" and "us", so might as well do this too)
-  [[Doom Wiki]] → [[Doom Wiki:About]] (if we're talking policy, better to link to an internal page than an "encyclopedia" page, especially if we split them again someday which I think we should)
- [3b] the part about "medical, legal, financial" is in the preamble almost verbatim; are both really needed?
- [6h] "wiki" → "[[wiki]]"
-  link to DMCA FAQ specifically, instead of just chillingeffects.org?
-  "disabling" → "counterproductive" (not general enough)
- Applied all except [3b] and [6h]. [3b] is repeated as such in the WMF ToS, I am not second guessing their lawyers. [6h] - this is not a wiki article; linked articles could be construed as officially blessed information by being linked to in this article. Thus such links should be kept to the minimum needed to explain specific points - in particular, links to other official policy pages are required. "wiki" as a term has entered the vernacular and it is not a job of this document to define its meaning for legal purposes. --Quasar (talk) 19:22, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
Last post from me. Section numbers in brackets.
-  At some point (or maybe in the jurisdiction section) we could remind people that they are subject to the laws of their own country or locality as well as what is outlined here, and that it is quite conceivable to do something fully compliant with this page yet putting them personally at risk. I'm thinking, for example, of German users taking screen shots of swastikas, or people uploading perfectly valid fair use images from a country where fair use legislation does not exist.
-  Might want to point out that attribution via a pseudonym or IP address is normal and acceptable (I remembered this being covered in the license itself, but apparently not).
-  "to the extent such requests are within the law." — this implies that admins are qualified to decide such, or that we have defined a legally sound procedure which the admins have agreed to follow (hah). "appear to be within the law" might be more accurate. (The general tone of this section seems needlessly confrontational, but I realize it was copied from the WMF version.)
-  "you can post a notice explaining your copyright concerns." — this is copied from the WMF version, but then omits the part explaining where to post. Arguably someone might notice it anywhere, given our aggregate editing rate; then again they might not. Central Processing has been in the same place for 9+ years and is heavily watched.
- I don't know why but I never saw this come through Recent changes and I wish it'd been posted more than 3 days before the ToS was due to come into effect, since now we must offer a significant period of time for review for any subsequent changes. Your first point is already addressed where it says "other countries may seek to enforce their laws on you," I don't believe anything else is required to that effect. Attribution is covered by our Copyrights policy and the fact we use CC BY-SA which outlines what types of attribution are appropriate for us. I am not a lawyer but I know what the DMCA says and for example a take-down notice based on the fact you don't like what somebody is saying about you can be completely ignored legally. There must be a valid copyright claim. If I HAD to, I would get a lawyer's advice before deciding to ignore a DMCA notice. However, your final point is valid and it would be best if the ToS referred to a fixed location for such reports. However to make that change we'll now have to go through the ToS approval/notice process again and this is too short a turn-around. We'll have to wait until enough issues accumulate to warrant an update, or, a certain comfortable amount of time has passed. --Quasar (talk) 17:34, 2 June 2014 (UTC)
- My fault really — the questions needing the most thought should have been asked soonest. Re your final point, obviously 6 more months isn't a huge deal, if an actual incident is as unlikely as people keep claiming. In the meantime, if there were a report, it wouldn't vanish, just take longer to be noticed. Ryan W (talk) 00:12, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
- All instances of "Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported" or "CC BY-SA 3.0" shall be adjusted to refer to the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0 license, as approved through community processes and as legally allowed under the terms of the current license. All textual contributions made to DoomWiki.org after 18 June 2015 at 9:00 PM CDT shall be available only under the terms of the CC BY-SA 4.0 or a compatible license.
- Yay! But does the date stamp at the bottom need to be updated? Ryan W (talk) 13:57, 25 June 2015 (CDT)